Hey Sorry I haven't read this yet... but this is a pre review to tell ya... I printed it and will read it later cause I GTG so I will leave the good review on chapter 2

Brandyn

Hey girl, it looks as if everything's starting to take shape, looking good so far. Can't wait till the next chapter. Keep it up.

Hey girl, this does sound interesting, you better continue, and your Michelle btw. Come on continue!

Erotica Within

It's interesting...I don't know, I liked it. It's certainly a change of pace from you.

I would have gotten to this earlier, but my e-mail's been on the fritz for about three weeks.

I'll read more when I can, and update when I can. I think I've got a few new things somewhere. And if I don't, I can always write something else.

Later.

~CDx5~

This sound like one big love triangle. Keep writing!

This is very good.. please continue

this is usually not my cup of tea, but i'm willing to give it a shot. so please, update soon. i like your descriptions. =0)

ps. could you read 'Tragic Traitor Tactics'? your feedback would be much appreciated.