i really like this, especialy the disapearing from the picture bit. its really lovely

It's pretty good...though I don't normally read poems, I'd say you're all right.

And, it's kinda nice to see another of my compatriots here.

The last word! The last word! AWESOME! _

Beautiful is the best word for this. The imagery is just... bam! Great job!

I like this poem.

Good one. But try hard buddy. Keep writing. God Bless.