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| MarvellousMarvin 2007-02-09 ch 1,  | abusei really like this, especialy the disapearing from the picture bit. its really lovely |
| Benjamin Cheah 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's pretty good...though I don't normally read poems, I'd say you're all right. And, it's kinda nice to see another of my compatriots here. |
| wolfeh 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseThe last word!! The last word! AWESOME! ^_^ |
| FrozenKiwi 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful is the best word for this. The imagery is just... bam! Great job! |
| Lui5ito 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. |
| Taufeeq 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseGood one. But try hard buddy. Keep writing. God Bless. |