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Reviews For: The Barbie Doll

Lightning Storm
2006-07-26
ch 5,
Garret is going to flip if/when he finds out his dad raped Sirenty. Update soon
Lindelea1
2005-06-30
ch 3,
hey, this story seems pretty good so far! i hope u continue soon!
Kayla
2005-06-28
ch 3,
I hope Sirenty and Garret hook up! he needs to get her away from all that!
Lightning Storm
2005-06-28
ch 3,
Excelent chapter. I'mglad you have he thoughts and feeling inthe story now, it is better.

My favorite part was when Garret said, 'you really think I have a big dick?' I found it hilarious, lol.

I can't wait for your next update.
Kayla
2005-06-24
ch 2,
Good so far..Mr. W sounds like an **..Hopefully Garret will save the day! haha
Lightning Storm
2005-06-23
ch 2,
That poor girl, I really like your story though. Please update soon.
Lightning Storm
2005-06-22
ch 1,
Update soon. I really likeyour story.
Regi
2005-06-21
ch 1,
Update!
Kayla
2005-06-20
ch 1,
Really good so far!
Joy
2005-06-20
ch 1,
Continue, I love it so far!
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