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| Miss. Paradox 2008-03-06 ch 22,   | Aw, how cute! I loved it! I really don't have anything to complain about. How rare. Actually, I must say that you probably could have actually made it longer. But, even as it is now, it's lovely. So, yeah, pretty much great job! |
| Laurel Havens 2005-07-15 ch 22, | That is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I was on the edge of my chair the whole time. You wrapped it up so splendidly. Thank you. |
| gonnabefamous 2005-07-12 ch 22, | oh I love happy endings! Thank you so much for a great story! |
| Nokturnal Augury 2005-07-12 ch 23, | well...yea, it WAS a little rushed, but it was nice nontheless! still, if u think u wanna rewrite itgo ahead!the more i get to read the better *grin* |
| brianna 2005-07-11 ch 22, | i really hope u put in an epilogue. great story... only thing i would consider changing is the really quick ending. just seemed a lil rushed. otherwise i loved it! |
| gummybears 2005-07-11 ch 22, | aww! you sure wrapped that up really fast...? oh well...yes and epiloge would be nice, mainly cause the story ended so abruptly.Loved it tho :)Sara |
| Carina 2005-07-10 ch 22, | Aw, this was such a good story, i'm glad it has a happy ending. |
| Nokturnal Augury 2005-07-10 ch 22, | *sniffel* beautiful. just beautiful. i loved it. this story rocked from start and u updated fast enough to overplease...you really rock. i think it was totally amazing. both ur writing skills and your imagination. just beautiful. congratulations! it was perfect. |
| Sunshine Knight 2005-07-10 ch 22, | OMG OMG OMG OMG i loved it! excellent ending by the way. I loved the story and cant wait to read others by u |
| Brianna 2005-07-10 ch 21, | yay! he's guilty! i'm so excited for maya |
| Carina 2005-07-09 ch 21, | Good job with the chapters. You're an amazing writer. |
| Jenn 2005-07-09 ch 21, | Yay! No cliffy for me to woner about while im gone! More! |
| gonnabefamous 2005-07-09 ch 21, | Great job on this! I love your story please keep going. |
| Nokturnal Augury 2005-07-09 ch 21, | i love it when u update like this ^^ so fast, so nice, so pleasant and the chappie ROCKED oh yea *starts dancing* |
| Nokturnal Augury 2005-07-09 ch 20, | good chappie! *violet (crazy side-personality) drags Sean in through the door and crosses the room, dragging him into another room and slamming the door behind her. you hear shouts. you hear protests and swearing* i liked it. things are getting serious... *violet walks back out and starts rummaging, frowning and muttering things while sean is screaming from the other room 'LEMME OUT!'* um... x-x yea well, keep it-grr! VIOLET WTF?? i can't concentrate on writing the review! violet: i lost my dagger! ...what are you going to do with the dagger? violet: *grin* on second thought...u got a spoon? o-O *gives her a spoon* violet: tnx u rok *takes spoon and walks back into the other room, grinning* *the door closes and shortly after you start hearing screams.* ^^; well, id better go before she hogs ALL the fun to herself! *jake busts into the apartment, fists clenched* jake: SAVE SOME FUN FOR ME TOO! *runs into other room. screams get louder* ...^^; |