What you have here is great! I love how you put aspects of a traditional romance together with 'nowadays' relationship, added in a lot of cash and sprinkled it with laughable irony.
I hope you update soon!
-Innocence

great chapters i loved them
cant wait for the next one
jenna and her mum remind me of the gilmore girls.
xox

Just wanted to say that your story so far absolutely rocked. I can't wait till you update!

okay its safe to say that i really dont like robin. she annoys me. i guess she means well with this whole save world thing shes going on about and the orphan stuff. but yeah im definently not feelin her. I really hope someone disuades jenna and wesley about the orphan thing. they definently arent ready for kids. they arent even in love yet.

Um really adopting a child? Wesley and jenna have only like kissed twice in the story and they are already considering a child? they havent even had sex yet... lets hope that someone comes to their senses because they could be headed for disaster.

hmm... Wesley is a very smart and devious guy. i wonder if hes had his eye on jenna a long time before he promoted her. it seems like hes had all this planned out for a while now. i dont think it was exactly spontaneous. im still waiting for the catch though. im suspicious. Wesley is way to perfect. he must have some sort of flaw...

Okay i adore this story! its so good! Im in love with it!

hey! i love your story to bits! it'll great if you can update more frequently. i cant stop myself from rereading them again! (:

Still loving this story. I just wish that you'd update more often. I find myself having to reread prior chapters to bring myself back up-to-date (not that i mind, love the story).

I'm interested in seing how the relationships are going to develop further. I have a feeling Robin knows that all is not what it seems.

I cannot wait to find out what happened between Kim and Wesley, way too much weird behavior. Update soon!

I love this story! Please update soon!

AAH! I love your writing :) It's SO good! Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please Continue with this story :) I love it, it weirdly gives me hope for love... (which is something I need!) This chapter was SO cute, and so well written. You make the reader feel like they are inside the chapter (or book, story?) Haha, anyways. Please Continue with this story :) It is SO amazing, and I just love it! Thanks
sincerely,
A Faithful Reader,
Allison !

aw very cute so far please update!

Me be loving Paris! XD But there wasn't nearly enough camera time for Wesley, and that sucks! I think you're taking too much time for Robin, and are leaving Wesley out of the picture.

Are you laying the ground for a Mark story, then? It certainly seemed so at the end of the chapter. I would like to read that :D

Wow!
I jst happened 2 come across ur story today and after reading all those chapters, i cant wait for d next one.:)
ofcourse, i wl b patient coz i luv d length of ur chapters.;) plz update soon.