|Reviews for The Promotion|
| Midnight113 3/5/11 . chapter 27
Oh Jon, looks like he made a mistake. Tsk, tsk. Poor Jenna, guys are like that though. I like the twist with little Anya and the adoption, it sucks that he's going to have to stay in the area while they work everything out. I think it would be awesome if Jenna was able to stay with him through the process but as long as they get Anya in the end. It'd be great if she could spend that extra time with her as well though. I also liked that Jenna showed a little bit of jealousy at the end there, that was some great interaction and then seeing Wesley so interested in what Jon did, makes me curious if he's going to go do or say something to him. Really great chapter, I can't wait to read more!
| Alinzar 3/5/11 . chapter 27
uh oh! Now you're gonna have to update even sooner! You can't leave us hanging like that!
Great job, I can't wait for more!
| ShrimpoJewels 3/4/11 . chapter 27
Oh man I'm so confused...
Do either of them actually care about Jenna? Poor girl...Jon is playing indifference possibly to not get hurt but then again...Wesley well he is indifferent.
| yakirra 3/4/11 . chapter 27
Agreed. Life is messy, life is all about the messy bits and if it isn't then your not really living at all.
I enjoyed the chapter. I think I like Jenna hurting, it's a bit sadistic or whatever, but I think she deserves it a little.
Looking forward to the remnants of Wesley's phonecall.
| animegirl214 3/4/11 . chapter 27
Ahh! Some random guy should just sweep her away XD
THanks so much for this chapter! :)
| EmptySh3ll 3/4/11 . chapter 27
I am really happy and grateful that you are such a talented writer who can portray realistic situations, that I can sympathize with.
| ximpulse 3/4/11 . chapter 27
I freaking LOVE your story. and I am absoluytely head over heels for Wesley. I have this idea that Jenna likes Jon becuase of his cahracter, but is sort of playing hard to get for Wesley to like FIGHT HIM OFF Which sadly isn't happening because Wesleys also a nice guy.
BUTT THEYRE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER! CAN THERE BE SOME ACTION SOON? LIKE LIP TO LIP...ELECTRIC TOUCH LMAOO.
just so jenna realizes that hes the one. and he realzies that shes the one
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You 3/4/11 . chapter 27
I love the chapter.
| carson7 3/4/11 . chapter 27
good chapter, although I'm disappointed the whole Kim drama didn't get discussed between Jenna and Wesley haha
| Kelly Rogala 3/4/11 . chapter 27
Oh I don't know who I want her to end up with! I love Wesley and I'm so super glad he ended it with Kim (I hated her!) I just hope its really over though. I want her with Wesley because they can be the happily ever after family but then I like Jon oh please put me out of my misery and finish lol or enough to give us a sequel! Update soon please!
| Pearl Button 3/4/11 . chapter 27
Hum...reading this chapter has made me angry at the characters. First off, I remember reading one of your A/N about adoption but that is the one thing that's really getting at me and sorry if this upsets you. I just feel this need to shake your characters and say "Do you honestly think you're the best people to take care of children right now? Just because you want a family right away doesn't mean you should have one!" I guess I feel that Jenna should sort out her personal issues before she takes on the responsibility of a child. Now, I'm all for adoption, being adopted myself, but I guess I just wished the characters had thought through the process a bit more? I dunno I guess I'm just upset about how Jenna didn't get the drama out of the way before she adopted- if that's what she really wants.
As for the Jenna/Jon/Wesley triangle I just hope it will be over soon. I know she's confused but if it were me I'd take a step back and remove myself to figure things out and then make the choice about everything. She should think about where she wants to be in life and other important things like that. Like in five years from now if she's not married to either Jon or Wesley and without the adopted daughter where will she be working? Will she have her own apartment? And if she does adopt then will she take a job? And how long could she stand having Wesley pay for almost all the bills? It seems like Jenna has a lot of choices to make and hasn't got her act together. Or maybe it's me? Anyway can't wait to see what happens next!
| xxLovelessly Yoursxx 3/4/11 . chapter 27
i agree with jenna. guys are sucky but shes hotheaded too lol i admire your talents in being able to switch the story up on reader without being cliched and yet still able to keep to the story line without confusing us. good job :)
| ebs12 3/4/11 . chapter 27
is he going to call john?
wasn't a Westley fan before but he's getting better. it helps that he's willing to put anya before everything like a good parent should
| Genato 3/4/11 . chapter 27
GO TEAM WESLEY! :))
| madkatter 3/4/11 . chapter 27
I'm starting to think that it isn't a matter of who wants Jenna, but who Jenna wants - can't imagine a person swinging like that (to be honest if I were Jon or Wesley I would walk away from her)