|Reviews for The Promotion|
| Sunny 12/6/12 . chapter 5
I am really enjoying the story. I sincerely thank whoever is editing or (beta-ing?). Most of all I enjoy the chemistry between Jenna and Wesley and the fluidity of their conversations.
| Mahteslover 10/17/12 . chapter 30
I beg you to please update this story it is amazing ... I want to finish reading it please put more up soon ...
| BebeEllis 10/10/12 . chapter 30
. . I'm begging you, please update. I'm procrastinated essays reading up to this point only to find out I'll be too preoccupied thinking about Jenna's situation to actually concentrate on writing. . All this to and fro, is getting to be a bit much. Really hope that everything works out soon.
| crazy4luv 9/21/12 . chapter 30
Are you going to finish this story? There's nothing I hate more than investing all of this time in a story and then having the author NOT finish it. I really enjoy your writing. Hopefully this one gets tied up for me.
| Sin-and-Smokin 8/31/12 . chapter 30
Wow this story is gooood- and it proves just how good of a writer you are. I mean I'm confused along with Jenna and I'm pretty much feeling everything she's feeling- a writer that can make her readers relate that is retry darn awesome
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this, or post the next chapter! (: I've was caught up since '09 and having been waiting excruciatingly patiently for 2 years! This story is by far one of the most amazing i have ever read! It keeps me super hooked, I've probably reread more than 20 times. I'm serious! I love this so much! can't wait for the next upload! 3
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 30
This story is so good! Please finish? :)
| emmeline campbell 5/28/12 . chapter 30
I don't usually leave reviews because I can never think of anything constructive to add :p but I decided some encouragement wouldn't be wasted :) I love this story and all the characters (except Kim ;)) so do please continue and know I am a reader who will stop reading if I don't like the story, and since I've got this far you can be sure this is a good one :) I usually balk at bad grammar so you're safe :p xxx keep writing, you have talent! X
| hollywood920 5/28/12 . chapter 30
Okay I know this is headed towards Team Wesley and I'm kind of disappointed about it for a few reasons. I actually started out completely on Team Wesley but at some point in the story I changed to Team Jon. I kind of agree with Marie. Jon likes Jenna for who she is, he challenges her, he brings out life in her. Wesley likes the fact that Jenna would be a good mother. He keeps saying that he could grow to love her, but he shouldn't be planning their marriage and their family together if he doesn't actually love her for who she is.
I know she wants to be a mother and the
thing is she still can be a mother with Jon.
Love shouldn't be what makes you feel comfortable, love should make you feel alive. She shouldn't sacrifice her love life for being secure.
Well that's just my opinion about everything. I do think you're a good writer and I hope you continue the story.
| Pream 5/19/12 . chapter 30
You need to upload a new chapter! I really want to know the ending! I keep going back and forth between Wesley and Jon and now I want her to be with Jon! Idk I am fusterated with Jenna right now but she is a cool character ;) do you think she will end up single in the end? Somehow I think so but if I'm wrong that would be a good thing XD Please upload a new or chapters ;)! I really like how your story is going! Even though there is alot of conversations, Ik what it's like to have an awesome life wherever you are but at least tell us why u haven't uploaded yet so all of your reviewers will know! Thank you for reading my review! I rarely review so you should feel good that I review your story :)
| twibbit 3/29/12 . chapter 30
:) update soon!
| poppy 3/3/12 . chapter 30
I hope you still receive reviews... :)
I just read this story in the last couple days and am caught up on the last 30 chapters. I was not present for the Jenna-is-a-slut war or whatever that was, and honestly, was not on that bandwagon. Because Jenna is AWESOME. What is so great about this story is that your characters are very believable. Yes, between the characters, there is some stereotyping like oh-Kim's-a-whore and oh-he's-a-cheater, but that happens in REAL LIFE too. And the best part is, any stereotypes become exactly what real-life stereotypes are, maybe superficially possible, but then they do something different and surprise you. I can't really give an example, but that's just what it feels like. And then there are characters who are completely surprising, like the best-friend role is found in Marie who makes a really awesome mom who can actually balance being the mom and the best friend at the same time. (But I kind of miss Jessica...she'd be a good alternative to Marie, Jenna needs more people. And it shows, when she starts talking about how she doesn't make friends, friends are kind of necessary now or she'll just close herself in and the decision will be even harder. I think if she had a group of good friends outside of the whole drama, maybe things would be put in perspective, the world isn't going to end if she isn't with Wesley in a traditional family, etc..but sadly she doesn't have a bunch of other friends which I'm sure you did on purpose!:) )
Though I'd never find myself in Jenna's position, I completely sympathize with her-of course she's confused! Like any big decision, she's going to be going back-and-forth and people are going to try to influence her decision, and she's going to try to make a pro-con list, but eventually, she'll have to go with her heart. Personally, I feel like however great Wesley might be right NOW after he realized how much he wanted this family, there's still something missing, and unless they actually figure it out, it's not going to work. And maybe Kim's still the problem, but I don't think Wesley's issues end there...Kim certainly caused his emotional wall issues, but she is (hopefully) effectively out of his life now, so if there's still something missing in the Wenna relationship (which I think there is), we can't just dump all the blame on Kim. But I was so proud of Wesley for calling Jon. He finally put Jenna first...he had always put her first financially, but as far as happiness goes, it had always been himself first, from the very beginning, being the fake fiancee, moving in with him, even adopting a child was the ideal way for Wesley to start the family he wanted.
And now for Jon...oh, Jon. He's really my favorite, he reminds me of a lot of my favorite fictional characters, from Gone with the Wind, from Gossip Girl, oh the list could go on...My first impression of him was ohhh a kinda sexist sleazeball, and all the stereotypes are screaming PLAYER, and then he turns around and surprises you by actually being really sweet. I hope Jenna ends up with him because there isn't a huge hole in their relationship. There are obstacles, sure, because no matter what, Jon is Wesley's FAMILY, he isn't going to try to hurt Wesley, no matter how much competition there is between them. Jon is refreshingly honest (and those should right away be warning bells for Jenna-if honest is REFRESHING, there's definitely something missing with Wenna) and I know Jenna got kind of offended with the cavalier jokes and stuff, but I think that's how Jon acts to shield his own emotions. Wesley hides things by being discreet, pretending nothing is happening, WORKING ALL THE TIME, but Jon hides things with his jokes. All of his no-hard-feelings stuff...I didn't think it was because he didn't care. I thought it was because he wanted Jenna to be HAPPY, and he tried to secure his role as a friend in the case that Jenna chose Wesley by telling her that there would be no hard feelings. And the joking the next morning? I think he knows that if Jenna saw him unhappy she'd feel even more guilty-he's trying to keep her happy! And even though the grand gestures are nice, where the guy begs you, tells you don't choose him because I love you, stuff like that, Jon wasn't about to do that in a country where Wesley and Jenna are sponsoring an orphanage, an idea that happened before he really came on the scene, and actually finding a child that they want to adopt. He's not going to do that with Wesley breathing down their necks and when it seems like, for the first time in a while, Jenna is ACTUALLY HAPPY. I think he's hiding his deeper emotions toward Jenna, not so much out of pride (Wesley's downfall) but out of a wish to see Jenna happy. And when he makes jokes and realizes Jenna is offended, he stops. He always stops when it seems like he's gone too far unlike Wesley and his Kim addiction (though I guess he kicked that). And when he didn't tell her his room number? He wasn't really ruling himself out, eliminating the choice. Maybe I'm reading way too much into it, but I think that he wanted her to know that he was there, he wanted her...but he knew his cousin would be the better choice. He wants her to be happy and well-cared-for. Right now, Jenna needs a guy who will take care of her, treat her like a princess. This is due to her post-Trevor mothering...now she needs a guy who will mother her so in turn she can be Anya's mother. And down the line, Jon will figure something out, or Jenna will figure herself out, and it won't be so necessary anymore. Jon wasn't pushing her toward Wesley because he didn't want her, it's just that he's putting her above everything that he wants, and he knows there's going to be quite a bit of regret if she goes with him and then her daughter has separate parents and it'll just be quite difficult. So anyway...I think Jon really loves Jenna (well, as much as can be possible in a few weeks). Wesley has had far more opportunity to fall in love with her, and he hasn't. You know what I always wondered about? Does Jon have a list of the things he likes about Jenna? I mean, Jon, being quite honest, probably the first thing he'd say is he asked her out because she's attracted and to piss off his cousin. But I think somehow his list would be a little more meaningful-looking at Wesley's list, she helps perfect strangers, she's caring, she's close to her mother, she's humble...they're almost like a perfect match to what Wesley thinks would make a good mother. I think Jon would find different things, littler things, like her fondness for pink martinis or something-something that doesn't necessarily make her top candidate for mom but actually just adorably Jenna.
Well, I hope you got through my rambling! I hope you don't mind all my weird speculations. To me, it won't really matter in the end if Jenna ends up with Wesley, Jon, or all by her lonesome because I know that you will tie up anything missing. Obviously, I'm rooting for Jon at this point, but if you brought another twist in where GASP Wenna doesn't have a gaping hole in the middle of their relationship anymore, I would switch to cheering for Wesley. I love Jenna, and so I know that you will tie up the loose ends in either relationship to make sure that Jenna will be happy. And really, that's all that matters for me:)
I hope you read the insanely long review:)and I hope you come back and update this story to make sure Jenna gets her happy ending (unless you killed her off or something, which I doubt you'd do, and I'd probably be crying, but I'd still be happy with closure I guess)
| Lissie 2/29/12 . chapter 7
When I read the part where Jenna calls him 'Westley' I seriously screamed THE PRINCESS BRIDE. Because I didn't make that connection before. And so then it just made the As you wish thing from a previous chapter that much more awesome. Anyway I'm really loving this story so far, I've never been interested in fictionpress before (been more of a fanfiction person) but someone recommended this story, and I can't stop reading it! I hope you update soon!
| meee 2/17/12 . chapter 15
Just so you know, Utah does not have very many polygamists. haha i've lived in Utah almost 15 years and i have never, not once, met a polygamist, because more than 60% of the state is Mormon. and yes, Mormons are monogamist. haha so anyways(: just thought i'd let you know since everyone thinks this about Utah(: oh and no, there are not a whole lot of farms and fields either. most of it is suburbs, not country. so anyways(:
loves from meee(:
| sakilyn 1/3/12 . chapter 30
I just read all thirty chapters in one day (because I'm on break so I had the time) and getting to the last chapter where Jenna and Marie are speaking about how Wesley seems more in it for Anya than for Jenna herself correlated with what I saw on TV today. I was re-watching Jerry Maguire and the part where they break up, Renee Zellweger says something along the lines of, "On the surface, you'd almost think everything was fine. See, I've got this great guy who loves my kid and he sure does like me a lot. I can't live that way." I was just struck by how accurate it seemed to describe Jenna's situation.
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this update when you can.