|Reviews for The Promotion|
| nicole7579 7/30/11 . chapter 30
geez can i slap jenna? she's tired of being a yo-yo but i'm sure jon and wesley are tired of being pitted against each other. i've said this before and she needs to be single. jenna cannot handle an adult relationship because she acts like a child. one minute its jon jon jon and the next its wesley wesley wesley. ugh she frustrates me...at this point i wish they would both kick her to the curb because she is so fickle.
anyways i still love your writing and the story, i just want to shake jenna. and while i hope both guys dump her...if she ends up with anyone i hope its wesley.
| AS 7/30/11 . chapter 30
Please update soon!
| AS 7/29/11 . chapter 24
I was going to write later on about this, but... HOW COULD WESLEY CHEAT ON JENNA! HOW COULD WESLEY CHEAT ON JENNA WITH KIM! KIM IS A GOLD DIGGER! If anything JON is BETTER than WESLEY! At first Wesley was... fun. But NOW he is a TWO-TIME-CHEATER! And he talked BAD about Jon. At least Jon doesn't cheat and just tells you if he's not interested. I really hope that Jon is better than Wesley. And Jenna isn't cheating.
| On The Tip Of My Tongue 7/29/11 . chapter 30
I just read this entire story in a day and a half with sleep and food and going out in between. I think I might deserve an award. I don't know how you can write almost 10,000 words a chapter. Any tips? XP
But, otherwise, I am very much a fan of your story. I'm not going to lie - the first chapter I read Wesley as Weasley and I've been thinking Weasley ever since. Also, when the metaphor for his fake smile and the fake mustache was made, I've envisioned him with a long, fake, well groomed mustache. I also hated him for a good half the story. But that might just be because I kind of hate Jenna. Not so much because of her personally, but because of her decisions I guess? Her personality as a character so directly clashes with mine. Like me, I wouldn't even think of adopting until I had my own source of financial stability and I wouldn't have to rely on a man I might or might not be involved with. And I try to understand the whole thing between Wesley and Jon, but it's difficult because when she first met Jon she started an intelligent conversation with him off the bat. The only thing Jenna's ever discussed with Wesley is their future together, their future apart, the company, their personal lives, and their family. It's like they're caught up in a world of them.
I'm not trying to disrespect your writing - not at all. I just guess I don't have as much of a bleeding heart as Jenna where I'd adopt a child as soon as I saw pictures of broken orphanages. I'd prefer Jon over Wesley, no doubt about it. But that's probably just because I'd clash with Wesley, you know?
Oh well. Those are my disorganized opinions upon your story. :) You're a wonderful writer.
| booboobeck95 7/29/11 . chapter 30
Wesley Wesley Wesley Wesley Wesley Wesley Wesley! :D 3
| 3H 7/28/11 . chapter 30
YAY! You're back. I felt a little slow reading this, because it's been so long but it all came back me.
Way to go Marie for making Jenna feel like shit. It's so lovely to hear that this man only cares for her because she's the mother of his child. First thing I gotta say is I don't think Jenna has picked a man yet. She's picked Anya, Wesley picked Anya. They haven't choose each other. There's no love, just slight admiration. Admirations isn't enough to sustain a relationship.
At first I thought Robin was mad at Jenna, or irritated with the guy she was talking to. As I thought this over, I believe her chat with Jon put her in a mood. He must have pointed something out about Wesley. She wanted to scold her brother for something he had done wrong and sparing Jenna's feelings she chose to do it privately. I seriously think she's disappointed in something he's done, and he knew he'd been caught because he agreed to speak with his sister one on one.
Sadly, I'm doubting Wesley. Even though I want it to be him, I've yet to understand him. Firstly, I cannot comprehend why he's clinging to so tightly to Jenna? If he cannot give her his whole heart completely, don't string her along. Same goes for her too.
He's always been so mysterious, but to much mystery makes me think he's untrustworthy, still. What's really going on in his head? And as for Jon, him going to Paris doesn't sit well with me. Anywhere Kim is means trouble in my eyes. Now, I'm not jumping to any conclusions, or maybe I am. I'm just saying she's drama and I feel she's about to start more, if she hasn't set the drama wheels in motion yet.
One thing Wes should do, is ban Paris all together. But it must be hard for him since he's still holding onto the sick relationship he has with Kim. Okay I'm being presumptuous again but whatever. Okay, I'm done with my rambling, please update soon. I love this confusing story. Also, I'm curious about this townhouse, there must be more to that story and I'm impatiently waiting to know what Jon spoke to Robin about.
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Midnight113 7/28/11 . chapter 30
Excellent work, I feel bad that Jenna had a fight with her mom but I understand she's just confused and trying to figure things out. I really want Jenna and Wesley to end up together mostly because I think he's really a good guy and he's going to be a good father with the potential to be a good husband. I think he really cares about her too. I'm curious about Jon and I want to know what's going on with him and why Robin was so upset. Very interesting... Keep up the good work and update soon!
| mylittleprincess 7/28/11 . chapter 30
update update update
| star.coated.sneakers 7/28/11 . chapter 30
well judging by how awkward their conversation is and what her mom was saying about her relationship with Jon and how it was, I'm guessing this story isn't going to end the way I want it to... Idk I just didn't feel Jon and Jenna's chemistry, I usually do but I'm really not feeling him. Oh well, I guess Wesley will get a daughter out of all of this.
| MelikaCalva 7/27/11 . chapter 30
I think I am as confused as Jenna now.
I enjoy each chapter!
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand 7/22/11 . chapter 29
i really love Jenna even though she seems confused most of the time,i think Jon is amazing mostly cus she isjust so funny and calm and fun AND he makes pancakes ;) but i think Wesley is slightly annoying but hey...no one's perfect!
iadore your story! ! ! ! ! ! !
please write more soon :D
love yo x
| witz13 7/18/11 . chapter 29
HI! Where did you go? Haven't seen more of this story! Growing desperate!
| Lucy1656 7/10/11 . chapter 29
Pretty please update soon! I love this story, one of the best I've read _
| star.coated.sneakers 7/7/11 . chapter 29
"Where'd you go, I miss you so, seems like it's been forever since your been gone" that pretty much summarizes what I want to say. Please update soon :)
| aliaschantra 7/5/11 . chapter 28
Just thought of something. It would be dramatic if Kim really is pregnant with Wes' offspring and Jenna would get pregnant with Wes' too. Seeing that Wes is no longer tied with the no physical-contact rule and is starting to get affectionate and Jenna chose him, it's not impossible that something could happen with their last day together in Ukraine. Wes would be put in an unbelievably dire situation. Though in this situation, if I were Jenna, I'd never even consider accepting Wes. Hehe.