|Reviews for The Promotion|
| Cherise 10/28/05 . chapter 3
J'aime bien le francais. Je parle un peu francais, aussi. But I'm no good at it...*sighs* And I can't believe that he got caught red-handed like that and he still tried to beg her forgiveness. If you get caught so openly...why even try? He never should have used her in the first place.
| supa-dupa 10/28/05 . chapter 1
Hey, like the story, but the mom seems totally immature. The way that you are portraying her character seems like a little high school girl, not like a mom at all. I actually almost stopped reading this story because her character was so annoying. I'm not trying to be mean, but you might want to take a look at the way you are writing her character.
| Sarah 10/28/05 . chapter 3
Great story, I don't know what you're worried about, your wtiting style is great. I love that bouts of sarcasm your characters have, classic! Only criticism I have is that in some places you repeat line, so you might want to fix that up. Example:
‘Watch your step, Jon’, Jenna translated. She frowned slightly, wondering what he menat by that. Co-workers flirted sometimes, that just happened. What a prude, she thought with amusement. He didn’t like flirting.
, Jenna translated. She frowned slightly, wondering what he menat by that. Co-workers flirted sometimes, that just happened. What a prude, she thought with amusement. He didn’t like flirting.
Also just a few spelling errors, "menat" which should be "meant". Besides that great story, and please update soon!
| dOrKy-GuRl03 10/28/05 . chapter 3
omg her boss is like so mean..but maybe he lieks her that is probably why?...keep going girl...loving it...peace girlo...i am so addicted to your story now...
| sam the bear 10/20/05 . chapter 2
sounds intersting so far, keep updating! and thanks for reviewing my work! notalot of people do that.
| devil's-fav-angel 10/5/05 . chapter 2
cool story update soon i really want to know what trevor is going to get
| Heather F. C 10/5/05 . chapter 2
it was nice! i like her conversations with her mom! keep this coming
| simplerose 10/3/05 . chapter 2
hey I really like where this story is going...anyways how old is the boss? just wondering anyways update soon :D -simplerose
| Cherise 6/20/05 . chapter 1
Oh God, as if it wasn't bad enough that her bf was cheating, she befriended the girl? What the hell. I feel s bad for her...because she doesn't realize how badly she needs to dump him. He's taking advantage of TWO nice girls, and that bites beyonf belief.
| Isabella Cancun 6/20/05 . chapter 1
Very good. I can't wait to read the rest! The beginning is a little confusing but your writing style is amazing. I love it!
| blazing gem 6/20/05 . chapter 1
Hi! I'm really liking this story (the promotion) so far. I like Jenna's sarcasm because i myself an a sarcastic person. I hope for more details as to what Jenna does for a living and the such. Plus, Jessica seems like a sweetie and she's innocent to the whole being two timed thing.I hope you update soon.
| Frosted Midnight 6/20/05 . chapter 1
this looks very interesting! I like it ! please oh please update again soon! please! I must know what happens!