J'aime bien le francais. Je parle un peu francais, aussi. But I'm no good at it...*sighs* And I can't believe that he got caught red-handed like that and he still tried to beg her forgiveness. If you get caught so openly...why even try? He never should have used her in the first place.

Hey, like the story, but the mom seems totally immature. The way that you are portraying her character seems like a little high school girl, not like a mom at all. I actually almost stopped reading this story because her character was so annoying. I'm not trying to be mean, but you might want to take a look at the way you are writing her character.

Great story, I don't know what you're worried about, your wtiting style is great. I love that bouts of sarcasm your characters have, classic! Only criticism I have is that in some places you repeat line, so you might want to fix that up. Example:

‘Watch your step, Jon’, Jenna translated. She frowned slightly, wondering what he menat by that. Co-workers flirted sometimes, that just happened. What a prude, she thought with amusement. He didn’t like flirting.

, Jenna translated. She frowned slightly, wondering what he menat by that. Co-workers flirted sometimes, that just happened. What a prude, she thought with amusement. He didn’t like flirting.

Also just a few spelling errors, "menat" which should be "meant". Besides that great story, and please update soon!

omg her boss is like so mean..but maybe he lieks her that is probably why?...keep going girl...loving it...peace girlo...i am so addicted to your story now...

sounds intersting so far, keep updating! and thanks for reviewing my work! notalot of people do that.

cool story update soon i really want to know what trevor is going to get

it was nice! i like her conversations with her mom! keep this coming

hey I really like where this story is going...anyways how old is the boss? just wondering anyways update soon :D -simplerose

Oh God, as if it wasn't bad enough that her bf was cheating, she befriended the girl? What the hell. I feel s bad for her...because she doesn't realize how badly she needs to dump him. He's taking advantage of TWO nice girls, and that bites beyonf belief.

Very good. I can't wait to read the rest! The beginning is a little confusing but your writing style is amazing. I love it!

Hi! I'm really liking this story (the promotion) so far. I like Jenna's sarcasm because i myself an a sarcastic person. I hope for more details as to what Jenna does for a living and the such. Plus, Jessica seems like a sweetie and she's innocent to the whole being two timed thing.I hope you update soon.

this looks very interesting! I like it ! please oh please update again soon! please! I must know what happens!