Oh... That's so sad...But it's really good! Ar eyou going to continue this? PS. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like my books! Sure, you can be Cabriel. Guess who Allie would be? XP

Wow, this is long. It's about the length of two of my normal story chapters, but what the hey, it's all good. =)

I found it easy to sympathize with this, mostly because I'm big on swimming too. I've been on the local swim team since I was six and I'll never forget it. I haven't been in the same situation with a guy at swimming, but I can see your frustration.

Interesting story.