That was the funniest three paragraphs I've ever read. Way to turn something not that exciting into the one of the funniest things ever!

That is extremely amusing! And I don't think it's just the bottle of wine I've just downed telling me that!

Jolly good show.

Funny stuff. Interesting and original language, as well.

Keep it up.

that's great! I really love the twist you put to the actual story!

Lol! I'm glad it all ends well. Hehe. ^^ I love your wry sense of humor, very amusing on a depressing and stressful day. I certainly hope to read more of your amusing little one-shots!(And thank you for all your reviews on my work. ^^ I really appreciate it!)

Great story! I used to be a pizza driver, and this definitely captured the scumbaggery of many pizzaria workers. Great that you made it into a parody fairy tale. Of course, a driver can laugh much more at the idea of mythical grand quests, since they do those every delivery. Hope the place wasn't too bad (or isn't, if you're still there)

lol! I loved it. I liked your use of "king (manager)" and the others.

That is hilarious.

Hahahahaha. Nice.

Masterful display lol...can't stop...laughing...

this going on my favorites for being a light up from what I'm used to seeing :D

*bursts out laughing* Cute tale! Love the matter-of-fact way you wrote it and the funny descriptions.. you've got a talent for humour!! *continues laughing* :D

Thanks lots for the review!

Excellent! Hee, hee. Still laughing delightedly.

HA!i lovelove it!