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Reviews For: The Missing

Smoky Bear 2005-12-05 ch 1,	now, this is the stuff i like... and i mean really like. abstract format, internal rhyming echoes (got to be one of my favorite things in poetry) n most people don't do it properly. this is cool, and you still manage to pack it full of the usual emotion.
Roadside Dryer 2005-10-19 ch 1,	I like it, it's good. The ending is my favorit: Why does missing you have to be such hell! Missing people does get hellish...I also really liked the part where you repeated 'The Missing' I thought that was pretty powerful, got my attention anway. Good job.
McKenzie Drestire 2005-10-03 ch 1,	Nice, i hope you find her again.
Charliebabe 2005-07-21 ch 1,	Why hasn't anyone reviewed this?! It's brilliant. I love how some stuff is in the middle of the page and the last line is bold. By the way, I added you as a friend on Livejournal. My username over there is charliebabe and I got a fictionpress account so I could review your stuff. So add me back on Lj?Awesome poem!