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| Parabolic Logic 2005-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseI really disliked the formatting. It doesn't do anything for the style of the poem or the meaning of the poem, therefore being extremely distracting. |
| Prevaricate 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseDamn left-wingers. I'm going to ignore the politics for fear of roasting you. I like the "newfound anticipation" line. There are a few grammatical errors... "your-self" should be "yourself," "far passed" should be "far past." S'okay. Prev' |