I don't know much about poems, But I always like yours!

this is my favorite of everything of yours i've read. Life is awesome isn't it? i especially know what you're talking about in the part about the waves and the sun... you made me want to go to my cottage even more! but great job again!

*Lauren

This poem is pretty good, i like the first part but the lastline distorts the rhythm a bit. or maybe its just me.Cool poem

Wow...some really powerful words and meaning behind this. It really made me think...guess that's the point, right!! Nice job...really liked it. :)

Words in this seemed to be a hindrance to what you really wanted to say. I love your theme, just perhaps adjust you wording a bit.

This poem is as beautiful as life. Great work!