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Whew!
Interesting read of a side of society most folks don't ever think about . . . too bad too much of it is 'true' (even tho' this is a fictional piece.) Hardcore, too - so be careful if child abuse issues 'trigger' you. Well written, good grammar, sentence structure and all those 'technical' aspects.
The most interesting bit, tho (aside from the story itself!) is the afterword. Excellent bit of research; kudos on that! And I suspect you (as well as I) have heard / seen too much of 'this stuff' (abuse crap) to deny its existance. I'm glad you wrote it. Yeah, it deals with some sick stuff - but then again, sick stuff really happens.
Thanks for a good story. I appreciate it (even if others might not.) Touchs me in places I don't want to remember; makes me remember touchs I'd rather forget ... which is why I added it to my Favs - to remind me. This kinda thing DOES happen, and I'm glad you had the courage to write it. Thanks.
~M

you're ** sick. get some help. the world doesn't need anymore pedophiles.

WARNING!! Reading this story may cause you to spontaneously burst into flames and spend the rest of eternity being sodomized by Satan. Just thought you’d want to know that.

OMG i loved that. i havent read this chapter yet but i had to stop and put a review just to tell u how hilarious that was. i dont normally read stuff like this, barely ever really, but this one pulled me in even tho it's the most...well u kno.. that i've ever read. even tho i dont support the idea (and im sure u dont either) its still a good read. does that make me a bad person? that i read this stuff? im not really into the whole church thing...i havent even read the bible. but i still have beliefs i guess. so does it make me a bad person?

Awesome, you finished it!

Great ending and last chapters too. I was really shocked when Dash killed Steve, but I guess it was going to happen sooner or later.

It was nice to know that Steve at least cared about Dash.

I have another question. Are Matt (yay, I figured that out!) and Dash dating or did Matt just wanted to get back in touch with the guy who pretty much saved his life even though he wanted to rape him at first?

Aww, Gany is scared of cameras...!

Another one: when Dash almost called Matt "baby" and the cologne and cigarette smell beforehand, was that a "now Dash has become Steve" kind of thing?

And Murray and Sang ended up together!

How old was Gany supposed to be at the time of the kidnapping?

All in all, a terrific story.

The beating up scene last chapter was...ouch. Really sick.

I never would've imagined this story to have a "happy" ending when I first started reading it. But that ending is a relief coz every character's had enough crap for one life time.

I really enjoyed reading this story (although it's quite deranging ;))
Hope you'll write something else !

Aww. :D Its finished

wow, that was crazy. i never expected that. o.o

but i'm still glad steve's dead. damn pedophile.

O.O

O...kay. That was really good. Last chapter too, by the way but yeah...I'm a lousy reviewer.
I know that Steve isn't exactly what you call a good guy, so it's not a bad thing that he's dead. But omg, now Sang's guilty of murder.

Please update soon !

WHOA?! DID DASH SHOOT STEVE?! GASPERS

HE BETTER NOT GO! GR.

NO DONT GO. ** HES LYING!!

The kid is cute o.o

Cordero Perez is the dead boy, ain't he. >>; So Steve was always twisted.

Steve needs to get arse raped in jail