|Reviews for love is a delicious delusion|
| thursdays and rain 1/12/08 . chapter 4
lovely collection ;)
| a lonely september 1/12/06 . chapter 4
yes, i know you're like... dead or on hiatus or whatever you are right now, but i'd just like to say that all this was/is brilliant, & i'd like it if you'd update sometime. (not that you're going to just because i said so, but hey, i can dream).
| clockwork kiss 1/5/06 . chapter 3
aw. i love this. "i loved you back in pink". great. describes juvenille love perfectly. very pretty. nice format.
| Forsakn 1/1/06 . chapter 4
LOL. I love this'un. Never saw it coming. XD
| Margot Tenenbaum 12/26/05 . chapter 4
.I never saw THAT !wow, but anyway, your writing is absolutely beautiful. And I just looked at your profile...you're only 14! Jeez! You've got some real talent. Honestly, I must seem like a 4 year old compared to you. haha.
| lostontheroof 9/27/05 . chapter 1
I wish I could write like you. You're really amazing.
I have to go wallow in my envy.
| Eva 9/13/05 . chapter 4
While the last two poems are a bit unoriginal and read more like prose, your first poem is the best...it is utterly a poem, utterly a vignette, and endearingly alive.
| FELICIA-SPENCER 8/30/05 . chapter 1
Very original. I love it. Keep these awesome poems coming my way.
| anonymous 8/18/05 . chapter 1
hi, it has been some time since I last examined your works, and I have to say you have matured in your style, and are willing to take risks which pay off, as evidenced by the uniqueness of your poem. needless to say, you have devised a poem which captures well the solitude and longing/desiring mindset of a girl, though the poem is unique in that I find it speaks for all inner girls within teens and women, and that is most important, that sense of universality and significance of thematic matter. furthermore, the metaphors are nicely wrought, nothing too excessively complex or bitingly/painfully blatant, so it's a decent job overall; keep writing!
| this is britt 8/16/05 . chapter 4
that's a bit disturbing. lol, but wonderfully written. and so bitterly human. I love how you do "f!ck"- it just made me giggle.
| this is britt 8/16/05 . chapter 3
now I'm getting where the title comes into play.
| this is britt 8/16/05 . chapter 2
I loved wallflower. "we just might be starcrossed supernovas" ain't that the truth?
| this is britt 8/16/05 . chapter 1
m. such a great title. you know, you constantly inspire me. you're boundless.
| pewpewpoppy 8/8/05 . chapter 2
(: you are so going onto my favourite authors list.
| pewpewpoppy 8/8/05 . chapter 1
"you liked my rose shadesthat were too big for my face;
(you said they were likeour titanic love that coulddwarf the biggest ‘bergs)
i loved you back in pink"