*tear* so lovely. on a scale from one to ten you get a ten. this kinda wat im feeling at this moment cuz of my ex but im really confused in the feelings you know cuz he well i dont think you wanna hear this so n/e way. great job keep it up and ill keep reading lol.

First off, thank , nicely written. Love is very painful. And if you want to, the rest of death should now be up...the other two chapters, that is. ell, thank you.

I like this poem alot. You have aptured peoples emotions perfectly, even if I dont agree with those emptions and think tey arte a lie. Thanks for the review btw...This is a really nice poem...some nice repetitons and all that...

As for why i think love is a ie it is a long story..and one you are probaby not intersted in...

OMG! You have no idea how absolutely amazing this poem is... it really means alot to me.

I feel EXACTLY like this about a guy I know. I think about him all the time... so much that it really does hurt. I melt whenever he looks at me... You captured all of that so well... pain of love is a perfect way to describe it.

You're a wonderful poet, make sure to keep writing!

-Lena-

great poem, very emotional and powerful..."my heart grown weak for love of you" very powerful line. excellent work

Laura