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| catseyeview 2005-08-19 ch 1,  | abuse"We string the sound of legends like prayer beads" - absolutely loved this metaphor, beautiful, and the style and image you create in the end. going on my fav stories list! |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseStrong poem! but it hurts me, I'm a huge music lover! Ah well...not holding anything bad against ya!;) I wish you could make powerful poems like this more often. |
| lackluster 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abusewow. the ending cought my attention, it sure has a nice format!! the part with the music...well we don't see eye to eye(I LOVE music), but that's ok. ^__^ great work, as always! ~tuesday |
| The Magician (Joseph 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI know a few people like you, you musicless hobos.Anyway I like the poem, it is pretty nifty, though some people do have music to drive away loneliness, or to channle unhad emotions, others see it to be wonderful and nice on it's own and don't use it to fill gaps in their life.Sorry if I took the symbolism wrong Joseph |
| liz anya 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery, I like the thing at the end with the dashes... Very creative. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abusethis is good. I don't really know what i would do when my music falls..but great work! ~Sorrow~ |
| emundee 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abusewow. this is the first poem I have read of yours and I love it. The simile at the end is particularly powerful |
| Pillow Biter 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI reallyl liked this. Such a turbulent story within these words, and I can almost hear the music as I read. |
| Anguria 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseLove it! I happen to love music, interesting to get another's point of view :) |
| Munchin 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI like how you made " Unbroken" into twp parts. That was cool. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseFun formatting. I don't know what I could do without music. My two loves - writing and music. Although I admit I cannot read it, I just listen. I am to teach myself soon how to read, so I can play the piano more efficiently. |
| Aquafied 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusetrickeling and facinating, music is very much my love, i could listen to it all day. loved your poem. |
| happy thing 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI would cry bitter bitter tears of hatred. Hehe, this is a good poem, and definitely see how this clearly depicts the path of mainstream music and how it has changed and how eventually it migh change so much that people will have forgotten, and it will no longer resemble the true music it was created from all those years ago. 'Tis a scary thought but a very well written scary thought. As for me, I know the wonders of creataing music, both classical and contemporary, and I don't think I could live without the former, the latter is more of a hobby anyway. It really is an amazing feeling though, creating music. I suppose it's much like writing poetry just through a different medium. I am sorry, I was rambling. Point: Good poem. |
| secret thoughts revealed 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseim not understanding this one but its well written so thats good i have some new stuff up so plz feel free to review |
| FunkyFlower17 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusegreat song! i THINK i get the msg. like the imagery and great vocab used. well done! |