Ech, eternity; a frightening concept! This works well as a one-shot short, but I could see it become something bigger, too. Really you've said all that needs to be said. Nicely done.

Very intense. I liked the use of time.

Ah. My jonesing for Chronos-writing is fixed at last.

An extraordinary, unique piece, as all of yours are. Piercing, perfect, lovely. Every line builds and raises to a subtle crescendo. You never disappoint.

Your inaccuracies were hardly noticed,Kay. Because I have just as much knowledge of cold as you do! Once again, I commend you on your description and use of words. I thought you couldn't get any better, but you justhave. I loved your ending, "Becasue I am eternity, And eternity lasts but a minute" It made me think,. like only you can! Well Done with this!

I was puzzled by some parts, but enjoy the theme immensely. Your writing style is descriptive and thorough and quite a delight to read rather than decipher like other people's writings at time (perhaps even my own, lol) Lovely little story and wonderful appeal to the senses.