BLAH UPDATE MORE REVISIONS. D: i wish i read this before the revision bwah.

Any chance of an update any time soon? I really love this story.

I just read this amazing story, and I hope you update really soon. The suspense is killing me, so please add more really soon.

This is such a wonderfully written story so far! I can't wait to know what happened in the past~ Aw, poor Aden, he's so misunderstood xD

You should definitely continue this story! Update soon please~

Okay, so wow! This is awesome!

I would love to see another chapter of said revision sometime soon... Hint, hint. ^_^

This review would be longer, with actual thoughts and such from me, but I'm about to fall asleep, so whatever...

Anyway, this really is awesome so far. Can't wait to see more!

Interesting. I'd love to see more of this story. I like it so far.

more please :)

Fuck. I hate cliffhangers.
Hope you get the next chapter up soon, this story seems really interesting!!
A question:
How has it been since they split?

Lee

What happened?! Please tell me! (sob)

I love Iris so much! I love aden too, and I want those two to get together but I think Aden needs to suffer a little *cackles*. I love your writing! Please update soon!

I like it so far! I've read some reviews and they mentioned that this is a revision.. it's too bad that I never got the chance to read the whole story before you revised the chapters!

Hopefully you'll be continuing this story!

what just happened here??
i were into your story when i want to click to the chpter3 button, THERE IS NO CHAPTER 3?..WHAT?...you delete it?? but why>? i want to read what happen regardless of grammatical error or whatever..and i really like the story even when it is in chapter 2 only..oh please bring it back..PLEASE for the sake of human kind...(lol ;P)..but seriously!...make it come back please!

“Don't patronize my wife!” Walking middle-age crisis cried, now indignant.

“Oh, but there is..."

That doesn't make sense :D Other than that, I still love this, though I forgot how much it makes me laugh XD The revisions are awesome, but I have to logoff my account to review 'cause fp is an ass-fuck.

Merci beaucoup(heart)!

You are so mean... leaving us to wonder what his side of the story is... SO MEAN. Oh well I guess there is nothing to do but wait.Keep up the good work.

I'm really enjoying this story right now, but I was just a little confused with all the names that wer used. First you said that the twins names were Leah and Karma, then you say they are padma and karma. And then you mentioned someone names san, who I don't really recall being mentioned in the story, so I was a little confused. ANyway, still a very good story.