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| White-Dragon-Goddess 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseHaha! I remember this shadow! We were sitting in Mrs. Howey's class and were forced to do that damn essay thing on whatever it was... I forgot the details on the topic... heh. Anyways... You know my opinions... ^_^. Oh, Emily is being really pissy right now... She has proclaimed that she hates Christian and me, primarily because she picked Sarah Chavis as her "temporary best friend" and you should remember what happened there... Anyways...figured I should give you a heads up... You'll recieve my letter soon. All I have to do is put your address on it and send it... Snail mail...eck... I have no other choice though. ^_^ |
| elfengirl 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseVery funny dearie. Hoever, I am from the south and am darn proud! ^^ But this was very tickling...Elfengirl |
| Cedric Quilfeather 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHmm. I found the title to be intruiging. I found the prose here to be . . . boring and pointless. I am sorry, I generally try to be well rounded in my commentation, but this one just hit me as mundane and a little strange. Perhaps I'm just missing the big picture, lol. Anyway, it was a good try. Perhaps you'll be able to rework it into something a little funnier or perhaps more of a moral lesson or something? I dunno. Either way, take care, and keep up the writing! |
| Mikki Amboree 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was really funny. I live in the South, so yeah... I know what you're talking about. Thank goodness I live in a big city! |
| face2face 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAs I live in Oklahoma, I have had many "shivers down the spine" that I can now correctly diagnose as the much-dreaded Red-Neckphobia. If I hear someone say "ya'll do that real good" (ESPECIALLY MY SUPPOSED ENGLISH TEACHER) one more time, I may have to scream and run for my life. I really like this story tho. Good job. It was quite funny! |
| empressfairyprincess 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's funny! But since I live in the south, pretty much I'm screwed. I don't have an accent or anything like that, but I'm not offended. Very inter-est-in-g! |
| Alteng 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI probably have the accent, so run for you life!! I live in Kentucky. This was some nice satire here. And I think I know some Ohioans with it. Long story. Anyway, thanks for reading An Irony of Fate. That story is the prequel. The other story is The Fall of Sagamore. And the story gets weirder. It has one of my favorite characters in it . . . Narrinda Jacinta of Hofgeismar the Accursed Spirit of the Forbidden Woods. It is as funny as it sounds, trust me. Anyway, I guess I'll go an check out some of your other stories. |
| Mystsong 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseThis made me laugh so hard my coke almost spewwed out my nose! Quite amusing, and very well written...I'm afraid I probably suffer from red-neckphobia,and unfortunately I live in the South...Sigh...I supose I'll just have to move north when I'm older. |
| Complications 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting. It felt -to me- as if you where conveying the trauma that they felt into a syndrome. I mean slavery is terrible after all, the Spanish used to by slaves to feed to their dogs... very well written. Thank you so much for your reviews, I have taken your advice. Thanks. |
| Only 1 Twitch 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHah, I'm not from the deep south but I'm from a rural town in Illinois that has their own share of rednecks. You forgot to add that after a while you start to sympathize with them. |
| InsaneShadowFan 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseHm...not really sure if I should laugh or scold you-I'm a southern girl, LOL-, but it was mildly humorous, mm...so I'll guess I'll laugh. ROFL. ISF |