i like your story since i know how it feels to love some one who hardly knows that you exist. i hope u write more soon.

This is really great. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work.

hey that was great. i liked how you were so descriptive. i could actually see this happening in a school hallway. keep it up!

Even though the premise isn't unique, your style totally is. You made it really easy to understand and everything flows really well. You might want to add more descriptions of the people and their surroundings in future chapters.

Aw, poor Ben! I like this story! Keep writing!

really good so far keep going

Hey, nice...I usually see stuff about girl likes boy, but she doesnt know he exists. This is a nice change...Keep it up!