i really liked it; a lot of my friends have gone through abortions and I was one of the few who would understand them so I really kinda understand cause they went through the same turmoil and in the end it changed them forever.

this is a very good poem, have a nice day!

I would have never imagined this was about abortion until I read the author's note.

Otherwise, this is pretty good. Good job.

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I really liked this one because i know exactly how that feels and im glad that u were strong enough to put into words..i've tried the words come out hateful...Good job

Must have been tough... I wish you piece, and I liked your poem, very original and deep... thank you

i would sign in but i get lazy sometimes, including today. thanks for reviewing, it's hard to cope with the fact that somebody special's gone. but anyways, i like this piece a lot, the title attracted me with the fact that i am studying french right now. i like how there's just so much emotion and how this person walks away from lust and all those negative stuff.. you are a pretty good writer and i hope you continue.

I like the new touch of French in this.

Hey there. I just wanted to ask, if it's about an abortion, then how come you know the baby has 'stunning blue eyes'? Other then that I really like it. I like the repetitive verse, kinda brings it all together.