I really liked this - I wish I could be a useful reveiwer and point out what and why... but I think I liked the fact that "you" were the only beautiful thing (flower) in the poem, but only went on to decay from your involvement. I also loved the little bit of rhyme at the end. Oh and the fact that "you" didn't really want someone who could last with "you" was pretty awesome.

Just a spelling/grammar note - .and.i'(m?). the

Like did you mean i'm?

and did you mean to put two periods between i' and the?

Please, don't think I'm being nit picky, I'm just trying to figure out if those mean something (because the spacing/grammar of your poem seems a LITTLE important here) in reference to the poem.

Great job! It really drew me in!

Cynical, but wonderful.

very revealing...keep it up girl!

oh wow. geez, you're a really awesome poet...great job, imagery...

This had a beautiful format, and a even more beautiful yet meaning.. I loved it, for sure. faves for this one, duh.

-lav

I like this one. It is different from your usual poems, I think...at least the form is different. Wonderful