|Reviews for Actaeon|
| Luthiena o Lorien 7/1/05 . chapter 1
Again, Kira: PLEASE START TO THINK FOR YOURSELF!Okay, Kira, we need to set something straight. I leave the IMAGES for the readers to create. I DO THE WORDS TO GIVE THEM A BASIC PICTURE. MY POETRY IS ABOUT THINKING FOR YOURSELF, NOT ABOUT ME HAVING TO PEN EVERY LITTLE DETAIL INTO A POEM, MAKING IT CRAPPY. Okay, I hope we understand now!
| Kira Deleria 6/30/05 . chapter 1
I think we get the point of The end! but i liked this poem a little. I think you just need to write more about what's happening and who he is and what he does rather than O woe is me for alak alak alak alaka alak...you get the picture ;)
| Shadow Lackard 6/27/05 . chapter 1
Omgosh. I loved this to the extent of my ability to love a poem or book that is not The Mists Of Avalon by Marrion Zimmer
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/21/05 . chapter 1
Great energy! I waited in bated breath for the end, what sadness!