humm now for criticism, try playing with different stanzas rather than all double spaced.

I love your poems! Number four could be a song...

Heyhey! Great poems!! I only turned off my editing radar for the first line of the first poem! Nice work! You had beautiful flow in each individual poem, and in connecting all of the poems together.-Allison

wow this was so pretty! i love the way you described the moon and the night, etc. you are a great poet keep up the good work my friend!

i like!

especially "dreams bring the memories of you". good line.

you're an excellent poet. keep it up.