Interesting, I liked it. Good descriptions too and flows all together really well.

lovely is really the word that best describes this

Bravo! This is lovely and eloquent.

this proves that not just girls make up code names. and by the way, where's MY poem? morgan gets a poem and i don't?!?! come ON, mr. strudel!

Cute, I like it^_^

Rachna: So graceful and lovely. This line: "She is like nothing else he has ever seen/ Unworldly, alien, but not a Martian" is a nice touch, but seems to break the flow somehow.

Peanut Butter: Love it! Dazzling, elogant, and gently action-packed with a nice touch of beautious wonder.

Oh, so very lovely. I don't know what else to say about it...but I do think I love it.

Wow. These are so heartfelt; I can really sense the emotion behind the words. I can relate to these in a way, because I wrote 8 poems (though I didn't post them) about each of my friends because I was leaving them. I love the last few lines of this one. They are so sad and so happy at the same time.