Moon Drop...heeheehee...

I loved your Eagles May Soar story, and I equally love this one. You're writing style is hilarious, and although I'm not a great fan of elves I like them in your fiction. I hope you get a chance to update soon...

this was really good! i really can't wait for the next chapter!

This is really interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter! It's really good so far, keep up the good work!

i am still laughing.Aie. . . *i need to check fp more often*

interesting. . . i never heard you had returned *grins* well we shall see

Moon Drop ha ha ha Flame Spite ha ha ha. Oh my god I can't stop laughing I can't. Loved the chapter and the names.

Hordes of Ninja elves! Whe!

It's cool. Nice names for the elves... ha! Serves 'em right to have silly names. ^_^

yikes! i will have only one week of summer left before school starts again, when you update next! i love this story! I wonder if there will be any romance between Cat and Alek. I hope so! lol ok have a nice day

omg! he was deaf? that is so funny! i like burst out laughing when i read that! yay on to chapter three

Hurray! you are back! I love this new story! i can't wait to read the next chapters. This first one was terrificly funny

brilliant! i love humorous stories. i hope you have fun at camp, thea. i wish i could go to camp...

humor. cookies. demons, elves, faeries, oh my! (i had sugar a couple of minutes ago) let's see, how long is four weeks?

bah. irresponsible eighteen-year-olds are the WORST.

blessed be, lily

I have a feeling this is going to get good. Loved the chapter.

Wuh…wait…a month? I have to wait a month to read more of this awesome tale? No fair! Alek sounds like every athletic jerk I’ve ever known. Cat sounds way better. I laughed out loud at the line, “DAMN. I was SO pumped to eat those cookies.” I can’t wait to find out what happens to them in fairy land, so hurry up! *whines*

wowowowowow!...4 weeks? Nu-u-u-u-u-u-U-U-UU! damn it...well i hope your sister updates, this story makes me loose weight j/k

UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

*screams* YAY! ..............YAYNESS MAGNIFIED!