This is a gorgeous rhyming poem. Good job.

beautiful. this was refreshing, very clean, flowing, seemingly simple but not peotry that i haven't read anything like in quite awhile. wonderful. love it love it love it.

Very beautiful. Makes me want to look back at the day and pat myself on the back for donig a good job. Great writing. Your one of my favorites!=)

Thank you very much for your kind words. The review is much appreciated I much say since my reviews have been growing slim of late. I suppose that means it was about time I wrote something new ^_^. So again, thank you very much it means a lot to me.

This was a lovely piece, very well thought out. The structure was very nice and lended itself to the piece as a whole. I have to say that the elegant wording is what I like best about this poem. It just has a melodious feel to it. Very beautiful and somber.

It is always rewarding to receive a positive review from a poem who knows what they are about.