i really like that

Wow. Ito favorite ko! So sweet yet so sad. (",) Nag-try nga pala ko na mag sign in then naalala ko na wala pala akong account! Ha ha ha!

beautiful. lyrical. i like how the lines are very short and the overall flow is smooth and does not attempt to swallow the reader in long, tiresome rhymes of boastful genius. the truth is best conveyed in the simplest, shortest ways possible.

thanks for the reviews. i have meant to read your stuffs for the longest time kaso daming dapat gawin. ngayon lang ulit ako nakakatanbay sa fictionpress, hehe...

write on! ^_^

I like this one very much. It sounds almost like a song - I really like how you've rhymed it. Overall, it's very well structured. I particularly like the last line - 'hurtful heaven'. Perhaps it's because it's alliterated that it seems to hold the most feeling. You could make further use of alliteration; it's ver effective in conveying feeling - particularly in a poem like this where the metre has a choppy feel. And it's an oxymoron. I like those!

beautiful. yet again. and now i see that wasn't just on epoem, this is your style, tis amazing, i love it. absolutely beautiful.

the shortness of each stanza made them linger on (paradoxically?)..i liked the feel of this piece. do keep writing =D

It has a good vibe to it and it paints a picture. ~ love lost

I really loved the ending, it was a perfect way to end your poem. The whole thing was very well written. Good job!

I really liked that this was split into threes, it added a certain something to this poem that I can't describe. I thought the opening lines were excellent, and the rest of the following were wonderful as well. Keep up the excellent work!

~*~AbunaiChikaraPs. Thanks so much for the review, it was very much appreciated!

Wow! I think this one has a very original, very cool theme. My favorite lines: "Midnight pins a star on my sins and I awaken."

wow i really like this. very expressive. good job!p.s. thanks for the review!