It was no where near utter crap. I liked it a lot.

no, it wasn't utter crap, it's pretty interesting. i like it.

I think the last line did it for me. I'm probably getting this wrong but I'm guessing its on House of Leaves. It seams like its jumping back and forth like the book did.

This was everything FAR from utterly crap. This was very sweet sounding yet powerful. Please write more.