i wanted to review to this story when i was signed in, but i had already reviewed. all i have to say, is i love this chapter. This revision is ridiculously good. i don't remember that little spat with Aelyn and Logan before, but it was brilliant. I know this review is coming 2 months too late, but better now then never. :) I had been waiting for this update since last December. i think (that is when you last updated the chapter, right?). lol all i know is that this one was well over due.

Sad... ..tear

love the plot!
update soon :)
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Awe what is wrong at home? Well I wish you the best of luck. This chappie really broke my heart. I beg of you to write the next one soon. If you ever need someone to talk to message me. Im always happy to listen :) Your Faith ful Reader :P

No! The last line of this chapter is so sad! But I can't wait to see what happens next...

I really like it so far!

Please update soon. You have a really interesting story here and I'd like to know more about this girl, is she the 'Angel' we heard about earlier? Was she the childhood crush or is it Aelyn? If so, how comes Aelyn doesn't remember him?

However, I do agree that chapter 15 was confusing.

'I seem to be losing readers faster than ever (sad face).'
Don't feel disheartened, continue to write!:)

That was very good are you going to write more i would love to read more!

I just cried. From that paragraph, I guess.
and i love this story to pieces and will be very happy if you updated! (:
please please do.

I´m sorry you never did end this story!
It´s so good and there are so many questions!

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omg update! please! very good story.

Are you coming back? It's been four/five long months.

hey great story, haha a little predictable though, anyway i hope you update soon

OMG OMG OMGOMG!! I LOVE IT!!

oh so that girl was his childhood friends? oh boy.