Good song. I liked the flow. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

I really love this! This is so unique and creative, it's just wonderful writing. Thumbs up for you!

Love,
~Dia

Beautiful.

Over all, I really like it. It flows much better than most songs I have read on FP. A little short. I think this would be more interesting if you used these same ideas and style and wove a story through it, even if only in the chorus. (Think White Houses, only different 0.o sorry, only thing I could think of even remotely like what I am trying to say, although I know I have heard it before...)

Very very good. Absolutely loved it!

*claps and cries*

i love it! "God makes boy meets girl meets snake..." it's so straightforward and yet so... layered. i think is the second best thing you've ever written. "the day the earth cried" being the best of course. keep writing!

good poem, i liked it

well, you reviewed me, so I'll review this one.

I liked the words- blooming mushroom cloud, songs never written. and it's all wrapped up with a nice last line; )

Wow. The theme, the writing, I like it all. Great Poem.

Still amazing me, Jill!LOVE IT! And the tile...perfect

Wow, that was very interesting! The third verse/stanza was my favorite, especially the line, "...will the realists ever dream?". Great job!

Wow. That is the most amazing song I've ever heard(or read). How did you come up with it?

wow..the line that really intrigued me was "Testerone running high"...I don't know, it just stood out. I don't read THAT line everyday *smiles* All in all this REALLY is a gr8 poem *smiles* gr8 job!

...Wow. I love it. It's beautifully written, and flows gracefully. I really like the second verse... It brings some things into veiw. Positively lovely, keep up the good work!-Whispered Secrets