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| Twilight Starr 2008-01-11 ch 1,  | abuseGood song. I liked the flow. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| DiaRose 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI really love this! This is so unique and creative, it's just wonderful writing. Thumbs up for you! Love, ~Dia |
| brittle hearts 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| AluminumMuse 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuseOver all, I really like it. It flows much better than most songs I have read on FP. A little short. I think this would be more interesting if you used these same ideas and style and wove a story through it, even if only in the chorus. (Think White Houses, only different 0.o sorry, only thing I could think of even remotely like what I am trying to say, although I know I have heard it before...) |
| Sahara Hayden 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery very good. Absolutely loved it! |
| theoldButters 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuse*claps and cries* |
| A Painter of Poems 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abusei love it! "God makes boy meets girl meets snake..." it's so straightforward and yet so... layered. i think is the second best thing you've ever written. "the day the earth cried" being the best of course. keep writing! |
| CynChan930 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abusegood poem, i liked it |
| CircusCandy 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abusewell, you reviewed me, so I'll review this one. I liked the words- blooming mushroom cloud, songs never written. and it's all wrapped up with a nice last line; ) |
| Aria's Loft 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. The theme, the writing, I like it all. Great Poem. |
| aBlOnDeRHermione 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseStill amazing me, Jill!LOVE IT! And the tile...perfect |
| Searching4Truth 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was very interesting! The third verse/stanza was my favorite, especially the line, "...will the realists ever dream?". Great job! |
| Anonymous 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That is the most amazing song I've ever heard(or read). How did you come up with it? |
| Crazy Biene 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusewow..the line that really intrigued me was "Testerone running high"...I don't know, it just stood out. I don't read THAT line everyday *smiles* All in all this REALLY is a gr8 poem *smiles* gr8 job! |
| Whispered Secrets 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuse...Wow. I love it. It's beautifully written, and flows gracefully. I really like the second verse... It brings some things into veiw. Positively lovely, keep up the good work!-Whispered Secrets |