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| EmotionsHaveNoBrains 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseI feel incredibly dumb right now but I have absolutely no clue what just happened. *So confused :( * So yeah I'ma go check out the other reviews to see if they can help me. |
| freakyAngel 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseLol. And they were actually stupid enough not to notice the blue curtains beforehand? Anyways, so didn't expect that part. And the intrigue about the blue sun got me going. Very nice. Don't stop writing! :) |
| thepiemaster 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abusewow, is this the only story you have that doesn't have any death in it? I remember reading something like that in Edge 8. I like this story, somewhat random but it really makes you think, if the sun turned blue could you be normal like Natalie or would you be wtf like Teret? |
| Chiclets 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, cool. Ha ha. |
| xbluxmoonx 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuselol. wow. that was a great one-fic. loved the ending too. great job! :-D |
| Lady E 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOh I adore it. Not an extraordinarily unique concept, but a solid, trustworthy one, and very well-written. The dialogue delivers the impact. Very nice. |
| hilaryjojo 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the colour blue! Um...yeah. Weird story but nice. Very original. |
| Leron 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThoughtful and sweet. You're really good at writing meaningful stuff like this. |
| For What Its Worth 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuselol...interesting... |
| CHIIJOY 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI love-loved this. Very out there. |
| Zigsz 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoy your writings... They tend to make you think, and that means you are a very skilled writer. Keep On! |
| Nona Lisa 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseMakes you think a bit about what Teret says. Nicely written and interesting perspective Teret has. |
| akaCHEEKS 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abusei didn't get it... hhaa.. sorry... it was just soo confusing.. i mean.. what... was he like the person who changed the color of the sun... and yeah... it was confusing... i'm pretty slow... so don't mind me... |
| Ashana 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...a wonderful idea! Amazingly well done dialogue! |
| hammielurv 2006-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, this story is so great. it's really...unexpected? but i still LURV it. write more long stories, PLEASE, and finish the natural born. i love that story. |