see, now you have a lot description.. I like this story.. when are you going to update again?PS.. by the way I have updated getting even if you want to check it out..

ha ha.. I already like it.. but yu should add just a little bit more descripstion..

ok. Great start. From what I read, I want to keep reading it. From just that, I was drawn in to the story. It is interesting. keep writing it, dude.