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| sporkofdoom 2006-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseThe imagery here is so vivid, chilling and lovely. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. Amazing writing, you had me hanging on the entire time. This is one of the best things I've read in awhile. Brava! |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, you made a car crash seem almost beautiful. Great use of imagery and metaphors. |
| dollface and her cancer 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWords that bite and crackle over the skin, leaving exotic burnmarks behind. A sharp, lovely piece of work. Nice. |
| smile persephone 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseEverything about this poem stung beautifully. The imagery is lovely, yet haunting. The description is just the same. Beautifully written. You're oh-so brilliant as is this poem. |
| linaeve 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseoh, wow wow wow. "because this what you get/ when you pollute the atmosphere"-- so flippant, so nonchalant and yet the harsh reality of the situation manages to permeate the mood brilliantly. LOVELY job. |
| Relayer 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseIt certainly is shocking. The choice of language is amazing - the way you use images of nature to describe everything is great. Written with style. |
| destiney hope 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWow that is really shocking! It was brilliant though as i have never thought of that happening and it is so deep the description and just effect of it was amazing. |