I love how you can make me have to go back and reread a poem just to figure out if it rhymed or not.

Can't say I have any suggestions for this one- it's brutally honest. I'm sure she knows.

I like how you compared love to a warm smile in your heart. The whole poem is sadly sweet, but that one comparison stuck with me. Good job.

~Leeona Trance

:( :) I love you.

Good advice. I think I shall take it, store it in my head, and hopefully remember it if I am ever offered a second chance at anything. *does so*

Beautifully emotive and sincere.

Quite nice.