I simply love this poem.

I can't say anything else, apart from it is just GREAT.

Must read more.

Infact I think I'll read this one again...

Wow. This is very nice. I like the rhythm flow. Like some, I suppose I also know what this means.

O.O; long but nicely done. the tragic harmony that incorporates the piece is simply fantastic! I could never come up with some thing remotly as good and as powerful as this was for me. the diction is just amazing, you convey your feelings and the emotions so well. the poem is a killer mainly for the hopeful begining and heart breaking finale. well done!

~* noelle

Starts out happy and gay and sounds like it's going to an out of the dark tunnel. Then ends falling back in to the pit. It's well worded and picturque. I told you many times, I'm here for you, and I feel I must say it again. Hip, I'm here for you. Love, ~Drow 218

wow . . . at the beginning you put your hopes and longings, and by the end you've fallen back to where you were . . very well written. bon.

Though I don't know what "Finally back" means, this poem was pretty good (but long). Keep writing. -ADD

Wow...I'm speechless...

Yes, I know quite what you mean. Nicely put into words, although I think sometimes you stumble a little with the rhythm. Maybe "I’d ne’er long for this", for example, would read better as "I'd never want this" or "need this" or some such? But just a suggestion. Very eloquent. =)