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Reviews For: Thunder

Noihseret 2006-06-30 ch 1,	this was really cool. I love how you make the king, the thunder durring a storm. ^^ very creative!! my review for 'on the pavement' didn't turn out so great becuase it wouldn't let me do the shift-enter trick in the review. ^^ so pardon the weirdness. lol. great poem!! write on!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-07 ch 1,	Love that second line.
Joey7691 2005-06-24 ch 1,	I like this piece, mostly because it portrays a sense of power and respectful fear. I thought towards the end that it would get a bit disapointing, but surprisingly the last line does this poem all the justice it needs. P.S. You appologise too much. I'm used to criticism. Your reviews are tough but fair and they did me much more good than harm. I'm fixing my poems for the better in my mind as I speak. Also, you seem to be forgetting that I write for myself, not for my readers. Criticism is a compliment in my mind. Thanks for the reviews and never be sorry for an opinion.
Weeba 2005-06-22 ch 1,	Whoa cool. This rockserates! I love all the descriptions of the onomotapeia, the different ways thunder expresses itself. And the way you leave out articles occasionally, like "sky goes grey", no "the". Nicely done. No negative comments. lylas (only you are one, so I suppose that goes without saying!), ~Weeba~
Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-22 ch 1,	very unique. nice! and nice name too, hehe, i like !