::O's:: I have story inspiration! The rage of betrayal is well conceived in this poem. I think that was what you were going for... I hope. o_o;; But, this was well written as usual, and your idea was a great one. Keep it up!

Great great great! Captures lots of vivid pictures. What really caught my eye was Hazel eyes :D

Such a confusing color, but an otherwise powerful poem :)

i can relate... awesomely done

wow, that was a totally awesome poem! I especially liked the last four lines, they were so powerful abd full of regret. Rock on!

Beautifully done. I love the words and emotions.

I really like this... especially:

"Behind glaring eyes, I see you watching me."

good job!