Reviews for Cloak and Dagger - FictionPress.com

Olivia 2005-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseHot damn. This was excellent. At first I thought "Gee, how could anyone misenterpret this? It's obviously describing Bush..." But all throughout the poem there are parts that could apply to so many different people in so many different situations. I even think I might have seen a personifactaion of Iraq as a single person. Well.Great poem, and I probably misenterpeted it, but at least I tried not to.
Story-Teller's Aide 2005-06-26 ch 1,	abuseGood poem
Akhenaten 2005-06-23 ch 1,	abuseDon't agree with the message of this one either... but I can see why some would. This was an excellent way to get your point across without insulting anyone too blatantly, and very well written. Once again beautiful imagery. I liked the last four lines, and you're right it usually seems to turn out like that. But you can't change anyone's opinions, I guess.
Osunale 2005-06-23 ch 1,	abuseWell...interesting. I like it, somewhat cyncical, yet not that nonsense I all too often see, very nicely expressive. You have a wonderful ability to say what you say in near-brilliant poetic form without sounding like a whiny, ignorant bumblehead. Way to go! Keep writing!