The last paragraph could have been split up into several paragraphs, especially where each person speaks. I like where you ended this chapter, it makes the reader want to read more. I though Taubey's character seemed a bit...odd, and misplaced from her character in the previous chapter. You did a good job of giving the reader tidbits of information, instead of shoving a history lesson down their throats. Overall, a decent chapter, and I want to read the next!

Looks like another good story XP Darker than most of them though

Hmm. I agree with most of what the previous reviwer said, your descriptions are indeed very good.

The plot has substance, and invokes interest. I am particularly interested in finding out who this "Fier" is...

Your descriptions are excellent! I especially liked the description of his pain. I could really feel that he was hurting. I thought the last few paragraphs (after she chases away the humans) were a bit forced, like you were trying to give too much information in one setting. It's a shame no one else has read this story, because it's very good and well-written. Kudos, and keep writing!

Up the rating, I think, otherwise it is the summary that caught my attention, hope there will be more soon