Another good one! I also like the Happy ** Birthday one. My toes are cold, I'm growing old, so come and R&R My poem.

Excellent! I loved the rhyming! I know it's all YOU, yet it reminded me of Dr. Seuss! GREAT WORK! Keep writing!

Funny, but something on exactly what you're talking about, because it's a little... confuzzing. (I love that word...) But yeah. Your rhyming talent scares me... I want some of it.

haha, i liked your descriptions...sounds just like home :P

I like the rhyme scheme and catchy phrases.

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! ROFLMAO! good poem, for sure a favorite now.

interestingly good.

SP

Funny, and kinda cute. Very nice rhyming, your words all work very nicely. Love the third stanza (actually I love them all, but I thought the words worked exceptionally well with the rhythm here). Keep writing!

Very orginal i liked it. On my rating system it earns a above avarge(6 out of 10)

I dont really see anything that needs improvement but i just feel something is not there or something.

Anyway good work and keep on writing!

Ah, I love this! Your rhyming's brilliant! It's nice and quirky and funny - excellent job!:)