Dude! That was really good.

But I want to know more.

So, I'll just bug you.

wow. makes you think. somany little hints, and she still ended up abused. god, note to self worthy story. anyway, really great chapter, and i loved the 'south park in the back ground' stuff, it made me giggle. kind of... oxymoronic? she's going through all this **, and then just kenny dying in the background.

Yay, another good chapter! I really like this story and am excited for you to write more.

HUHZZAH FOR NEW CHAPTERS! i think that was a really good way to end it. really. good strong, yet kjind of leaving you hanging, ending. kudos to you.

AGH! A GOOD CHAPTER BUT YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! The ending was a lovely cliff hanger by the way. This story is still very intruiging. Hope you get more inspiration soon!

WOW! I love it Ariel! yippe it was good!! yay!!

stalker...is ...scaring...me... O_O he's disturbing. anyway, you should update soon. yuppers! even though it took me next to forever to get back to this (in my defense, i had forgotten to put it on my list...)

woot, the scars are BACK! as am i...

Holy crap, Ariel, this is a good story! Keep writing! Oh, BTW, is the "math" part supposed to be humerous, or does that actually have meaning later in the story?

WOW! This is WONDERFUL ariel! But I still like Solo more. A LOT more!! Better update both soon!

Wow. This story is freaking scary and frustrating! I hate it when main characters don't have the balls to stand up for themselves! (Note- this is a huge compliment to you, because you've created this character with such a background and personality, that I hate to see her suffer.) Really REALLY good story so far. Hope you continue it REAL soon!

Holy **. This is one f**king scary story so far.

*off to read the next chapters*

Really good job writing! All the flashbacks keep you on your toes and make people want to keep reading. Keep it up, i really like this story!

Really good and different...Not to be mean or offensive but the GD word isnt really nice...but awesome story...God loves you!

i love your story. it is very intriguing and i cant wait to find out what will happen to Kiri next!