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| SoulDesire 2005-12-08 ch 1,  | abusewow...this is really really good. I compliment you on your magnificent work of art; it's outstanding. I can't wait to read more from you. |
| TheCryingGame 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. I loved it. It shall go on my favourites. Congrats. ~TheCryingGame |
| andyoufollow 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS POEM! |
| Sylvia Ann Elliot 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abusePerfect! I absolutely love it! This is going on favorites. The way you set up a syllable scheme, and how you rhymed every other line- perfect! I loved how you kept coming back to the theme. "Draw me wings, so I won't fly"-> Beautiful! The concept of drawing as an unmaker is brilliant. I especially loved the last stanza. Kudos, kudos, kudos, and keep writing. |
| Osunale 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...I love this! Awesome structure, and very nice word choice. Keep writing! |