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| Blue 2006-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's better than okay, its an excellent write. |
| Isabella22 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was really great! I loved it! Just thought I'd comment though, on the line, "I call upon the name". I think you should put "Thy name", though. Good job! It was awesome! |
| mountaingurl 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI know this feeling well. Beautiful job. |
| Getuie 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... Another piece that made me want to pick up my guitar and just play whatever felt to fit. Do you have chords for this? |
| Needa S 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseBut then ok, it is beautiful. Awesome job! Keep writing for Jesus. God Bless ya! Needa S. |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I know that God is pleased with the light you're shining for Him. Excellent songs and poetry! You're very gifted! God bless -- J.max |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseits beter than ok its great... FINISH IT!! lol |
| The Postscript 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abusebeautiful...i love that image of a sinner in chains being set free by God's grace...keep writing for Him. God Bless, silentescape |