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Reviews For: A Sinner's Return

Blue
2006-12-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's better than okay, its an excellent write.
Isabella22
2006-11-13
ch 1,
abuseThis was really great! I loved it!

Just thought I'd comment though, on the line, "I call upon the name".

I think you should put "Thy name", though.

Good job! It was awesome!
mountaingurl
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseI know this feeling well. Beautiful job.
Getuie
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful... Another piece that made me want to pick up my guitar and just play whatever felt to fit. Do you have chords for this?
Needa S
2005-08-24
ch 1,
abuseBut then ok, it is beautiful. Awesome job! Keep writing for Jesus. God Bless ya!

Needa S.
maxnotevoltage
2005-08-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is amazing! I know that God is pleased with the light you're shining for Him. Excellent songs and poetry! You're very gifted! God bless -- J.max
simpleplan13
2005-06-23
ch 1,
abuseits beter than ok its great... FINISH IT!! lol
The Postscript
2005-06-23
ch 1,
abusebeautiful...i love that image of a sinner in chains being set free by God's grace...keep writing for Him. God Bless, silentescape
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