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| Volvo 2007-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseI like this one, its cool that honestly reminds me of times being home alone |
| FTL 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseit's okay for you first poem =) |
| a silenced revolution 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWell done, Mignights Scream. I like it. -Isabella May |
| Callipygian 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseYou made it flow nicely. This seems to be about taking innocence and being intimate, but yet still having nothing there to feel. I dunno, I'm tired ... and irking girl giggles fill this entire computer lab ... |
| les petits bateaux 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, it portrays a lot of emotion and solitude. Good job. :D ~~Trinity |
| WickedSilence 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThe content of your poem perfectly matched your title. But I think the end rhymes detracted a little from the immediacy of the loneliness. To me the sense of being alone seemed more a forceful presence than a person's thought. Otherwise, impactive in its simplicity and to the point. |