I like this one, its cool that honestly reminds me of times being home alone

it's okay for you first poem =)

Well done, Mignights Scream. I like it.

-Isabella May

You made it flow nicely.
This seems to be about taking innocence and being intimate, but yet still having nothing there to feel.
I dunno, I'm tired ...
and irking girl giggles fill this entire computer lab ...

This is really good, it portrays a lot of emotion and solitude. Good job. :D

~~Trinity

The content of your poem perfectly matched your title. But I think the end rhymes detracted a little from the immediacy of the loneliness. To me the sense of being alone seemed more a forceful presence than a person's thought. Otherwise, impactive in its simplicity and to the point.