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Volvo 2007-07-18 . chapter 1
I like this one, its cool that honestly reminds me of times being home alone
FTL 2007-06-16 . chapter 1
it's okay for you first poem =)
a silenced revolution 2007-03-02 . chapter 1
Well done, Mignights Scream. I like it.

-Isabella May
Callipygian 2007-02-02 . chapter 1
You made it flow nicely.
This seems to be about taking innocence and being intimate, but yet still having nothing there to feel.
I dunno, I'm tired ...
and irking girl giggles fill this entire computer lab ...
les petits bateaux 2005-08-10 . chapter 1
This is really good, it portrays a lot of emotion and solitude. Good job. :D

~~Trinity
WickedSilence 2005-06-23 . chapter 1
The content of your poem perfectly matched your title. But I think the end rhymes detracted a little from the immediacy of the loneliness. To me the sense of being alone seemed more a forceful presence than a person's thought. Otherwise, impactive in its simplicity and to the point.
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