wowzers

I like it! Very deconstructed chic; I like the natural flow. But there's something missing... I know what it is. You desperately need some zuegma in the second stanza. Desperately.

Come back to me when you have some zuegma.

Lmfao... ** English.

Wow! I really enjoyed this; I can totally relate to a lot of these emotions! You really captured those hard-to-describe feelings into words. I love it.

ohh...i like...i know what you mean...how nothing ever seems to be exactly what you want it to...especially when it's for that one person...keep writing!