lol, this was brilliant. your use of italics, enjambement, everything.

eheheheheheh

i lied, im not really laughing

it was entertaining though, i read it a bit fast i think though, anywayz, good job

sorry *laughing* i still can't get over the word "MANKY" I'm really laughing out loud! I use "munky" and "skanky" but this love child you've utilized here is diction at it's best. gotta go my sides are killer now!

i love the last line... how the poem doesnt end... awesome job