Ouch.

"So here’s a kiss and here’s your heart back"

Probably in bloody peices.

wow. this hits on the mark.

*cries* Like I said, something to be envied. Excellent; intelligent; brilliant.

Yours,-Nyx

I really like this, it describes exactly how I've felt in a past relationship. Very powerful poem, that it is.

oh tragic, delicate and yet so overwelmingly touching to read. such a powerful and moving poem, the emotions seem to tumble straight from your heart. i love "Breathed life into my crippled heart" and "So here’s a kiss and here’s your heart back" i can relate to this aswell, in ways, and this is a wonderful piece. great job.

Anna, Anna, Anna... I hope this has nothing to do with Josh... :) No, I'm kidding, it was very unique and strangely uplifting... Maybe just to me though...

wow that was amazing. I can really relate with the sentiment in this poem. Very very good.

this is absolutely beautiful! i loved it! and you know what makes it so unique, is the fact that you're putting a twist on love - most poems aren't about admitting how they never really loved someone. It's so refreshing!

if my eyes could shed tears, this would be when, great poem, i feel somewhat guilty now.